You’ve got a brilliant profile, it’s just a tweak suggestion, but honestly, it’s great.
The only thing I would change is the very first paragraph in your intro, but it’s fantastic from there onwards, I can’t understand why you haven’t had more applicants.
It’s up to you, but personally I think kicking off your intro with Hi, we’re Barbara and Mike bla bla bla is a much stronger start.
It then tells sitters exactly who they are helping out straight away, and then you come across as being super friendly, & approachable straight away… instead of doing a sales pitch to a sitter, whereby some may click away at that point, before reading on to see how lovely you & Ruby Tuesday are.
Sitters only sit for people they like, so your opening words are the most important, but your own personality doesn’t shine, as you’ve redirected it into questions aimed at the sitter instead. But it’s not about the sitter at this point, it’s about you, because they’ve already clicked into your profile at that point, they were already engaged.
In the first few sentences I didn’t get to feel any nice friendly emotions towards you personally whereas the rest is great at that. It’s you I’m sitting for, it’s you that writes my reviews, and I need to feel like I want to help you personally, because THS has an abundance of other ads with cute cats and lovely pools, where they get their friendly personality across right at the start, so it keeps sitters engaged and wanting to read more.
Instead the only feelings about you, were that you’re business savvy, sales-orientated, and good at strategy… and whilst I connect really well with strategy minded people, there are much more important traits that I need pet owners to possess.
Owners need to be friendly, approachable, likeable, love their pets, kind-hearted, easy-going, which the rest of your profile does really well, just not your opening lines, it’s just a sales pitch, nothing about you, nothing about Ruby Tuesday.
You could easily weave the pool, spacious home, cat lover, & NC part into it naturally after you introduce yourself.
But honestly, you have a good profile, just the sales pitch intro could mean you put some off straight away before reading on to your really strong paragraphs.