Drop the 420 reference. I don’t think it helps and it puts an idea in the reader’s head that wouldn’t be there otherwise.
Similarly remove the mention of “party”, especially if you’re applying for sits over a holiday period.
Having THS reviews behind you is by far the biggest boost you will get. If you’re flexible with travel over the holidays then last minute sits would be a good thing to go for as holiday sits in big cities are in demand and fill up with experienced applicants. Also try some short sits. More reviews in less time and not everyone wants to do sits that are only a few days so less competition.
About:
I’m a dog walker and pet sitter, so I spend most of my working day with other people’s dogs, and I wouldn’t have it any other way. I moved here from the East Coast a few years ago and love exploring the parks and museums nearby, often with a dog in tow. I also work freelance as a writer, which means I can work from your home and the pets get company for most of the day, not just at feeding times.
I’m a non-smoker, first aid and CPR certified, and a quiet, tidy houseguest. Evenings for me are a film on the sofa, ideally with a cat on my lap.
Experience:
I spent X years working at a kennel, caring for dogs and cats every day. Walks, playtime, feeding, and giving medication to dogs who weren’t keen on taking it. I now walk dogs professionally and sit for local clients, including an anxious pit bull I just finished caring for.
At home I’ve had kittens, senior cats and rabbits, so I’m comfortable with everything from a bouncing puppy to an elderly cat who needs a slower pace and a watchful eye.
Sample application:
Hi (host name)
(Dog’s name) looks like a sweetheart, and I’d love to look after (him/her) while you’re away from (date to date).
I’m a professional dog walker and pet sitter based in (city/area), about (distance/time) from you, so I can easily come by beforehand to meet you both. I’ve also worked at a kennel, where I cared for dogs every day, including walks, feeding, playtime and giving medication. I’ve just finished a sit with an anxious pitbull, so I’m used to taking things slowly and keeping a nervous dog’s routine steady. (put in something from your experience that matches their pet)
While you’re away, (dog’s name)’s routine comes first. I’m a quiet, tidy houseguest and a non-smoker, and I’m first aid and CPR certified. My days would be built around (his/her) walks and meals, with trips to your local park, and I’ll send photos and updates as often as you’d like.
(Optional line that shows you read the listing, e.g. “I loved the photo of him on the sofa with his ball” or a question about the pet’s quirks.)
I’d be happy to set up a video call or meet in person, whichever suits you. I have references from previous clients on my profile, as I’m just starting out on TrustedHousesitters, and I’m keen to earn my first review here with you.
Thanks for considering me
(Name)