For the most part, my applications take just a few minutes to write. From what I have read here, I imagine ours might be a bit on the shorter end. We are full-time sitters who have done many sits on THS and have a pretty high acceptance rate.
I generally start with a short introduction that states our full-time sitting status, how long we have been doing it and where we are from originally.
I think it is also helpful to include a bit about our itinerary, so if I know where we will be coming from, and the earliest we could arrive at their location, and/or know where we are going next , and the latest we would be able to stay, I always mention that as well.
If there is anything the hosts mention in the listing that seems to be important to them ,and we are able to meet that need or preference, I will reference that specifically. For example, being okay with their small dog sleeping in the bed with us, having experience with a particular type of breed, not looking to be gone for long periods every day,etc…
If there is anything in particular about their location that we really like, or really suits us, that gets a mention as well, such as being near great hiking spots or in a quieter, more rural location.
Also, if we happen to be applying to international sits and I don’t know where we will be just before theirs at the time of applying, I always mention this in case it is important for them that the sitter books travel soon after confirming. So far this has not been an issue for anyone.
Because we have a really detailed profile, I don’t get into too much in the way of personal details about us. I don’t try to ‘sell’ ourselves to the host. I end the message by inviting them to take a look at our profile if our message piqued their interest.