Please don’t take this personal, I’m trying to help, but there’s a couple of really important things in your profile, that tweaking, perhaps that will help. You’ve got a lot of detail in your profile, which is great, but you’ve missed some important things out.
Your title - This is what you have:
Come take care of two cats in a historic Art-Deco house located in Boise, Idaho!
But as sitters, before reading your title we already know you have cats & you’re in Boise, and ‘come take care’ are your opening words, which aren’t appealing, they’re instructional, rather than personable. Then at the start of your intro (which is the section we read first) only Coco is mentioned, not Clementine, so you’ve kicked the whole thing off with confusion straight away and your titled revealed nothing extra apart from it being an art-deco home.
Instead start your title with something that sitters don’t already know, and make it sound desirable, such as…
Lovely Art-Deco Home bla bla bla
Also…
Your ‘empty nesters’ term may not be understood by some sitters under 35 year old, or those where English isn’t their first language.
You don’t mention how many minutes walk it is to a food shop etc and/or driving time to it. It’s vital we know a sitter knows where the nearest food shop is.
You mention both cats characters towards each other… but you don’t mention many nice things about their characters in general, there needs to be a balance. Are they friendly to people, are they loving, cuddly, funny, cute, adorable etc.
Hope that helps, but it’s great you’ve included as much detail about certain things that you have.