I agree!
You’ve done a great job of including thorough information – all of which is important to review at some point – but a lot of the pet care details (Responsibilities) can be saved for your later conversations with sitters. (For example: “Always lift him away from you as because of blindness (or naughtiness) he will stretch out paws.” and “The cats are not allowed in the double room” don’t need to be in the listing) In the listing, it’s best to focus on (1) the positives about their personality and (2) the basics about care.
In the Home & Location section, you’ve done a nice job by:
- describing the basic layout of the home
- describing the specific bedroom the sitter will stay in
- describing walkability and public transit
- describing the most attractive features of the home
As others have mentioned, you don’t need to describe the closet space or storage space the sitter will have. (Similar to the previous note, this is too much nittygritty/unnecessary detail at this stage.)
Avoid phrases of limitation (beginning with “but”) – like “but I do keep some covered as the animals tend to go on chairs etc” and “but limited clothes’ space.” These make the listing sound more negative. Without misrepresenting the situation, keep it focused on the positive.
I don’t know anything about Dingwall or Inverness… but on the map, I see it’s near the northern coast, which I imagine must be very beautiful, with tons of scenic nature? If that’s the case, be sure to use some descriptive language that demonstrates this. You don’t need to over-do it, but a sentence or two would give sitters an idea of what the area has to offer.
Some details I’d suggest adding:
- for how many hours can the animals be left at home alone?
- fill in the Amenities section
- is there a parking spot available for sitters who bring a car?
Also, play around with some alternative headlines. “My fun trio” is cute but is focused on you and doesn’t really grab a sitter’s attention by appealing to them. Think about what might attract a sitter, like:
- Close to City & Nature
- Beautiful/Scenic
- Quaint Town
- 3 Adorable & Easy Pets
A new headline might look like… “Cozy Home in Quaint Town Close to City & Nature with 3 Adorable & Easy Pets” or “Scenic Area on Northern Scottish Coast with my Fun Trio”
These communicate appeal, which will help hook a sitter into reading your full listing and learning more about your fun trio 
Hope that helps! It’s all about thinking about it from the sitter’s side. And remember that this isn’t your welcome guide – you don’t need to go into nittygritty details yet. Stick to a detailed summary that highlights everything you love about your home, your area, and your pets!
I think this would also be helpful to other HOs too to understand how a sitter might read a listing. You took a lot of trouble over this 